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Bionicle: Poison Storm

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First Page- coming soon!
I do not own Bionicle.
I will be submitting 1-3 pages once every week.
...As disturbing and immoral as this may be, a Toa's got to do what a Toa's got to do...
*He enters Cheza's body*...

~Toa Vakama (Spirit of Fire)


After defeating Makuta during a battle to save the heart of Metru Niu, Vakama and the rest of the Toa Metru set out across the sea with their little number of rescued matorans to an island they hope to call their home. Alas, when exploring the island to indicate whether it was habitable or not, our group of heros where attacked by a large apparitional rahi known as a "Seducer". During the battle against the mysterious beast, Vakama is fatally wounded while protecting Nokama, who had been fallen to the rahi's might. Luckily, all escaped...
... nevertheless, all failed to notice what the Seducers attack had done to Vakama's body until it was too late. Vakama's body had become a vulnerable vessel, while his spirit transformed into a "Whisp".
Now it is up to Vakama to find the antidote of his new aquired condition of possessing/escaping other vessels before he is disintegrated by the Poison Storm or harvested as energy by the Seducers and their master, "Kimorad". During his journey, however, he is befriended by a mischievous and 'chatty' ,and unusually tall matoran named "Cheza", who had the same condition as he... only... possessing was her natural power. Cheza tells Vakama that if he helped her escape from Kimorad's realm, she would gladly give him the antidote.
Vakama felt that Cheza was hiding something, but agreed to her request.
Has Vakama made the right choice? Or has he inevitably put himself into a trap that would end his and his fellow Tao's existence forever?

Vocabulary:
Seducer- A large flying rahi in the shape of Vakama's disk launcher (only, it has a spiky tail). Nobody knows where they came from, but these glowing blue beasts serve as slaves that create and harvest whisps for their master, Kimorad.
Whisp- After his body fell into a deep, almost deathly sleep, Vakamas spirit had taken form of a whisp. Whisps are ghostly versions of their vessels, but appear as glowing "mist balls" that float around helplessly to the weak minded. Whisps can only be heard by other whisps (or Nokama, since she had the mask power of translation), and wild rahi.
Poison Storm- A storm that only comes once every three years that somehow causes living beings to become whisps while it kills off the previous whisps. Almost seems like a normal rain storm, only, the clouds are purple; the lightning an eerie blue hue; and if you drink this water, you will become a vessel.
Kimorad- Kimorad is the fallen toa of the island of the tall matoran and whisps. He hides behind a dark cloak to conceal his identity for his fall had changed him into a monstrous being. He stands fifteen feet tall and holds a large hammer that can shatter one to dust if hit by its might. Kimorad is the age of one hundred thousand years and relies on the energy of whisps to stay alive.
Cheza- This tall matoran is as mischievous as she is clever. She is the master of security and escape, and may be the only choice Vakama has of getting his body back. Cheza is a purple matoran with icy blue eyes, stands as tall as a toa, and her mask contains similarities with Nokamas (Only, alot... "funkier"...). Cheza's weapon of choice if a dart launcher, and her mask power is the power of possessing others' bodies. He elemental power remains anonymous.

Now that I've got all that under control, how bout I end this comment with another quote?

... I'm not Vakama... I'm only borrowing him for a sec...

~Cheza

Enjoy!;P
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